Friday, 23 September 2011

Apart Away.




                                                          Sweet love miles apart
                                                    Still unsure who walked away.
                                                          Was it you? Me? Both?

~Almas Kiran Shamim
(My first attempt at Haiku:).... Dedicated to the people who were once a part of my life.)





5 comments:

Nazeeb said...

awesome.

JaLpArI - tHe MeRmAiD said...

thanks..

Nasnin Nasser said...

nice poetry in few words:-)

JaLpArI - tHe MeRmAiD said...

thanks nasnin :) glad that you liked it :)

Susie Clevenger said...

A beautiful attempt and success at haiku...I am sure there will be more

Now reading ... "The Witch of Portobello" by 'Paulo Coelho'.

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